I never really realised it before
But I've just lost some respect for him
I don't know whether to tell you or not
Because even though you're my best friend
It's a pretty gory story
I wish you could just read my thoughts
So you could see what I really think
Coz this situation's got me sketichin'
And I dont know how to explain it
But that's the way it is
I now realise what he meant by
"You dont wanna know what I've done"
I never thought it'd be that bad
But I'm realising now
That its more serious than I though
I dont know what to do here now
I cant just make this known to him
He'd look at me like I was naive
But I'm telling you coz I know you'll get it
You'll understand what I mean
So I know I can't do much
And I know if I talked to him (which won't happen)
That he'd just end up hating me for it
That's not what I want at all
And all of this has happened, just because I care
I know I'm just making this bigger
Making a mountain out of a mole-hill
But isn't that what happens
When you look up to someone
When there's nothing you can do but pray...
Author notes
why do ppl have to do stupid things?! and then wonder why you feel like you do, just because you respect them.
This is an annonomous contest so plz dont write my name thank u
A contest entry
- If I Was Your Girlfriend... by Pisces Pieces.
1500 points, ended October 25, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I like your different take on the contest
I wish I had a girlfriend that I felt like I could trust with absolutely anything! What a great feeling that must be...
You seriously leave a reader wondering what happened, really thinking through everything you say here and trying to piece it together...
I hope you really have a friend that is there for you and that you trust like this!
Thank you!
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hey thanks.
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