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In a word.... love

A soft kiss,
A lingering touch,
A longing gaze,
from hypnotising eyes.

A partnership unrivaled,
A loyalty unsurpassed,
An unbreakable truth,
too great for words.

Yet,
we try to form it
into
one
incredible
word....



Love

A contest entry

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  • useles
    October 23, 2007

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    I use to feel this...
    I love the way you describe it. Me and Zack could never put it into words... but I guess you only need one word


  • And Hyetal
    October 22, 2007

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    eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

    Again pretty and lots of imagery. I love you!!! ^^

    Always,
    Cassie

  • star wars fanatic
    October 15, 2007

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    Aw, so sweet. You make me sick, bro! Just kidding. I love your work and this was so amazing too--like something that should be the inspiration for a painting or something. Excellently done.

    P.S. I'm seriouslyy getting off now. lol


  • Little Blue Bird
    October 15, 2007
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    Good write

    I like it. Good job.


  • transit
    October 14, 2007

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    wow! there is so much depth in the first two stanzas and in the end, it is summed up very simply.

    I agree to all you have said here. It is truly amazing how big love is yet we just make it a simple foru-letter word.

    very nice. good luck in the contest!


  • warrior-eagle
    October 14, 2007

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    Aw.I liked this. Specially how that last stanza says basicly oh we dont know what exactly it is but we make it into one word...love.period.awesome.

    ....Simply Me♥

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