From the first day I saw your face,
you had lit my world
with your enternal grace.
from now and 'til that day
you remain all that I sh'all embrace.
The fierceful heat of the sun,
shines so bright
it knocks me to the ground
ohh, how I pray to stand
on my own two feet
with her, above crystal sand.
Sunrise in the distance.
The beautiful glow of her light
when she walks into a room,
forgetting that we are side by side
I stare off and imagine,
"you and I; under a fullmoon."
The colorful age of love,
hovers above earth and life
without one, we struggle
we stumble,
that could never be right.
Together is never wrong.
The untouched page
to the invisible signature
today, may suddenly change
and so she writes,
"From today, we'll stay forever ".
The clear reflection of her eyes
finding ways to find mine,
searching all through time
here she draws the line.
Sending love home.
The greenest of the grass
the highest of the tree,
time sinks in an hour glass
and so does our journey.
The deepest of my dream
won't let me see the shape of her smile,
so far away to believe
her happiness is stacked up in piles.
Time is our joy.
The sweet scent of your presence
glooming before me,
written by the act of your absence
I began to write,
"From today, you remain overseas."
The beauty in the sky
is as blue as the ocean,
while many lies are disguised
they wash away in slow motion.
Revealing the truth.
Author notes
Reality of love discovered within some amount of distance.
I hope you liked this poem! Thanks for reading! and please comment!! =]
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From the first day I saw your face,
you had lit my world
with your enternal grace.
from now and 'til that day
you remain all that I sh'all embrace.
THis is such a good begining.. That ull stay faithful forever. But when you say in the 2nd verse ohh, how I pray to stand
on my own two feet
with her, above crystal sand ... u determinded the gender of the one.. So it's no longer possible for a girl to live the words about a guy she likes.. Yet it's very amazing and personal :_)
Time is our joy. <-- This is a nice quote
Revealing the truth <-- a very good end.. I think you're really skilled at using words.. KEep it Up -
great poem
what truth.. ?? ...i did not get that part.. but overall brillaint write.. great scene..lots of words..i had in mind... beautiful poem
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wow
omg i love this!!! its every girls dream to get this poem. whoever she is, shes lucky and sounds special
great write. my fav line:
ohh, how I pray to stand
on my own two feet
with her, above crystal sand.
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Hey there im `not to good at talking about love poems but I like them
I love the poem but it was a little long and seemed to be idolizing but that’s good and bad
I love a lot of your ending lines sorry I cant say more but keep up the good work
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Cute.
I like how your emotions flowed through ease and calmness....
Just perfect.
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That is so sweet. very well written! I wish everyone could view love in that intense of perceptions.
Your girl is so lucky to have you (and apparently, your lucky to have her too!!!)
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Babe!
I'm running out of things to say !! You are just too good for your own good ! Nahh . I just love this poem ! Very beautiful and the colors are just cute ! LOL
Is this to who I think it's for !!! Luuuu ... yyy .
You know the rest ! LOL
Anyways ! I love this . The single lines between are just brilliant and just completes the whole thing ! My favorite lines ;
The beauty in the sky
is as blue as the ocean,
while many lies are disguised
they wash away in slow motion.
Revealing the truth.
Byebye!
[p.s. I need a new poem]
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NO DOUBT
THAT IS SO TRUE, THIS POEM FILLS YOU UP WITH JOY AND HOPE. I LIKED IT. THANKS FOR THE READ.
LUVPOET******
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This is a good write...I enjoyed feasting my eyes on it...Thanks for sharing such beautiful poetry...Peace
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Good dedication piece, very easy to relate to for anyone who has been in the same situation.
Good write.
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It's a beautiful tale of love you got here ^^. I love the format, and the one-liners give such great effect. keep well, I love this poem.
-Riche
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Aww. That's really good. I loved it.
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this poem was beautiful...it was so sweet and beautifully written...great job!!!
~mandy
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