My relationship
is to this moment.
I will be true to it.
If you join me here
in this moment
I will love you,
too.
Author notes
Simple... but effective
A contest entry
- In The Company Of Compassion by CarolDesjarlais.
900 points, ended October 15, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I enjoyed this short piece. It was a delight to read, more so because you said a lot with just a few words.
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Present moment to present moment...it's all anyone truly has. Well composed, and good luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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ph it turly is simply and yes, effective...nicely penned, ty.....
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I like it
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wow! a very profound statement...written with strength and love. this was a delight to read, as usual. you're just awesome.
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So simply put, but well said. As always, a refreshing outlook.
Thank you for sharing your wisedom!
blessings,
Michelle
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Beautiful, sensual write. Very simple and to the point, but sometimes that can be all that is needed of love, for two people to just be together, enjoying each other's company. Good luck in the contest.
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