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Hollow Heart

A question, without an answer.
The sunrise, without the sky.
The occean, without the water.
The truth, without a lie.

The time, without a second.
A life, without a soul.
A smile, without a reason.
A winner, without a goal.

True love, without any hope.
Lust, without a kiss.
Dreaming, without any sleep.
Trust, without the bliss.

A hollow heart you'll carry.
A broken dream you'll sleep.
A haunted soul you'll bury.
An empty hole you'll keep.

Find the answer to that question.
Place the sunrise in the sky.
Fill the occean with the water.
Tell the truth and hate the lie.

Count the seconds with the time.
Give your soul into your life.
Hold a reson that your smiling.
Win the race because you're right.

Know hope comes with true love.
Hold a kiss for her you lust.
Go to sleep and dream she's with you.
Be happy and know you trust.

Author notes

Top of my head rhyming here.
Took about half an hour.
I like it it's different to what I write normally.

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  • warrior-eagle
    October 15, 2007

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    Wow,this poem flowed better than i expected it too. Mm,i liked it.good job.

    ....Simply Me♥

  • we lit a flame
    October 14, 2007

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    the first two lines immediately intrigued me -the poem flowed beautifully. there's not enough poems about Hope.