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I Give Up

I gives up on everything….

I only hurt people…

Wats the use…

Im sick of always hurtin people…

I was pissed off wen I said it…

I didn’t mean to…

I am really sorry…

But it don’t matter anymore….

I did it again and ive fucked up…

Im sick of this all…

Why cant i….

Why does it hurt…

How can I stop it from hurting..

Why wont it stop…

I give up from now on….

Forever and ever…

My mouth is closed….

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  • ELmo LuVZu 4eVA
    October 24, 2007
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    its gud i like it ... u dont screw nuffin up hun ily mwa always will...<3

  • ELmo LuVZu 4eVA
    October 24, 2007
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    .........

  • LovemeNHateme
    October 22, 2007
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    good

    this is good!!!! veryy good!!


  • Melodies gold member
    October 21, 2007

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    I feel like this simetimes...

    But I just open my mouth and keep messing up anyway. I miss you, my 'lil Aussie Sister!

    lol Your big sis, Melodies


  • jstrauch
    October 15, 2007
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    baby u could never hurt me to much love


  • Apsinthion
    October 15, 2007
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    reading the other comment, i don't think the typos are a big deal around here since this poem is all about expressing your feelings, and as i always say i really like that about you; the fact that you really know how to pass on your feelings to the reader through your simple words..

    ~rana~



  • Tarja
    October 14, 2007

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    I honestly could'nt get past the typos...
    "I gives up on everything…."
    "Wats the use…"
    "Im sick of always hurtin people…"
    "I was pissed off wen I said it…"
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