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Suffocating By You

Seen with a dark hint
Loving in this evil embrace
Taking and giving you away
Rode off to the darkness
Gave you to the light in the day
Loving these deep shallows

Moments have passed
Watching the light break through
My dark room I've heard about
Written in history I make my way now
Taste the beautiful death run
And get off in this embrace

Let the dreams take over
Resolution to waking up
Never return to the real
No

Kept in the asylum
Sanity to regain
To refrain the lies
And the truths in yourself

Lying there you watch it all fade
Taking the efforts in vain
Baby won't you be alright?
Baby won't you die tonight?

Watch the visions fade
Blurring slurs coming to
And the main is worthless
Sometimes it's about who you were
And not who you are

Tell me it'll be alright
And I'll die tonight
Choking on the lies
And the truths of the world
Suffocating by you

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  • Coco Mara
    October 15, 2007
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    I like this poem. There are dark aspects to it, but it also seems really sad to me.