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Keep It To Myself

Keep it to myself

Its okay there I know

It won't bother anyone

What it is I don't know

But I will keep it to mind

That if I see you one more time

I'll break bars in the sky

Split down the sun

Then I'll drain it to you

And I won't even run

It could simply be

The last thing I keep

To my memory

Keep it to myself

Up on a shelf

Goodbye once again,

My only friend

This isn't the end
This isn't the end…

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I dropped my heart by the sight of you.

Again.

I think it'd be better as a song.

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  • Pisces Pieces
    October 23, 2007

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    No, no, can't keep it to yourself, it's not healthy! I love the part about 'seeing you one more time' as though it would be an elation that you would do anything to have...even though it caused more pain in the end...but it isn't the end...is it.

    Wow I feel like I make NO sense, but I hope you get my drift!

    I like it alot..if you make it in to a song, let me know, and then sing it!


  • Poetic Drug
    October 15, 2007
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    this is cool kali wow... bravo marshmallow


    • Tweedle Dum
      October 15, 2007
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      oOOf. Marshmellow.

      I'd like to have a marshbellow bean bag. Hah. Thanks. It's 'okay' I think. It sounded better in my head. hah. lala I miss ya, you used to be like right behind augusta..now you are like...waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay out somewhere in the middle of milk land. I dont know. Hope you are doing well

  • Tweedle Dum
    October 14, 2007
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    Oh.

    Hey neat. My notes go with it! sweet...Yeah, totally an accident guys..calm your butt down. I wish I could applaud myself, lol.