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Shiver

I felt the cold chill down my spine;
it was like another risky autopsy-
    & i was the one on the steel plating.

the room was below my range,
[at most it was 50 degrees.]
and while your blue eyes avoided mine,


i held my face
like on a weathered night
because i have never felt
     
        misery at it's worst.

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bahh i write like crap...

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