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Night of Terror

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Wizards whisper in the night
You crouch and shiver with fright
Witches and Warlocks gather 'round
Goblins and Ghosts move in to surround
This is a night to celebrate terror
Be careful now, no room for error
One little slip and you'll be dead
You may even lose your head
As the Horseman comes calling
In fright you'll be crawling
Praying for mercy upon your soul
Hallow's Eve will take it's toll
If you chance to make it through
To touch the silky morning dew
Enjoy your year free from fear
Before next Hallow's Eve draws hauntingly near

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  • Recluse Writer gold member
    November 4, 2007
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    Well here I am in my new house all alone and the night is drawing in on me...I decide to catch up on my buddies writes and I get the SAME ONE to scare the clappers out of me before I go to sleep

    "C H I L L I I I I I I I"

    Great spooky write Bunnykins

    Goosey


    • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
      November 4, 2007
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      No fear, my dear Goosey, for Hallow's Eve has come and gone. I am sure you woke up with your head still on.


  • midnight eyes
    November 1, 2007

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    Wow. This was great. and your page is amazing.



    Amber

  • Zarokk666
    November 1, 2007
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    One word, just one - COOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • requiempoet gold member
    October 25, 2007

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    ha ha ha I was like where is this leading...and then HALLOWEEN! I forgot about that stupid holiday!


    • requiempoet gold member
      October 25, 2007
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      I haven't had halloween in forever cause My daddy said that I'm too old so I haven't tricker treated in years.


      • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
        October 26, 2007
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        Of course you're too old, silly! You're an adult now. Now, you're supposed to go to costume parties and stand around and guess who everybody is.


    • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
      October 25, 2007
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      Halloween's not stupid, 'cause when you're done trick or treating you get to go home and separate all the candy and get all excited when you look at the piles of the candy that you love!


  • aliceramone
    October 17, 2007

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    a great halloween piece with good imagery and soft alliteration...great flow and rhyme as well-well done


  • Arizona Sunset
    October 16, 2007

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    wonderful creepy tale and I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing, I will be sure to run when I see a horseman calling. best to you in the contest ~blessings always~


  • LAPoe gold member
    October 15, 2007

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    Ohhhh... I'm coming to your house for Halloween!!
    it sounds spooky and I'm ripe for spooky! the only
    things that's spooky at my house this time of year
    is how fast Halloween candy can disappear into my
    hubby's tummy... now that's a scary sight to see.
    So give me a road map and I'll be on my way
    I'll show up on All Hallows Eve begging for an old
    fashioned popcorn ball so get popping. Just keep an
    eye out for the middle aged cranky lady wearing the
    pre-menopausal fright mask... that'll be me.
    OH YOU ARE IN RARE FORM TODAY MISS BUDDY!
    Doc.


  • Melodies
    October 14, 2007

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    Happy to be scared out of my wits!

    YES! This is a truly fine poem for Halloween and it made me smile and want to give you a hug for entering our contest! Love the silky morning dew. lol


  • elemental angel
    October 14, 2007

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    Wonderful expression and a great take on the prompt. Thank you so much for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck.
    Bravo

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