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"Just A Pawn"

Just a pawn,
in a players game.
I have no face,
I have no name.

When the player,
is through with me.
He locks me up
and throws away the key.

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  • LuchiaNanami
    November 14, 2007

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    Wow!

    That was really depressing, "throwing away the key and using you" is not right at all! I like this poem!


  • Menace
    October 14, 2007

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    Simple....

    I've got to have more than that. Good form but I need imagery and creativenes to award a trophy. Good Luck and Thanx for entering!