Today's so sad I can't escape the pain within my soul
I sit and cry and wonder why...why you had to go?
Then I close my eyes and realise you are always there
within my heart and soul as I say a gentle prayer
You are a butterfly that floats by on a summers breeze
A meadow full of flowers swaying gently and carefree
The wind that rustles leaves crowning tall tall trees
The sun, the stars, the moon the ebbing of the sea
You are the river of love that flows deep through the heart of me
my precious daughter your beautiful essence is caught in all of these
God had other plans for you that meant we could not meet
I'll love you for eternity Megan that will never cease
Author notes
For my daughter Megan
A contest entry
- Hush Little Baby by Uasal Laoch Aingeal.
1900 points, ended May 16, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for the beautiful poem. I'm sorry to hear that you were never blessed with the oportunity to meet your daughter. Your poem reminds me alot of the song I'm Already There by Lonestar. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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You're welcome.
I will look that song up
All the best
~sugar~
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o sug i am so sorry honey if i read tghis rif=ght i wish i could hug you and tell you its going to be alright and it is i am comming to the UK da,,it one day in my life i have you my main family and others there but i love this write sug i was plesured to read this
juju
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Beautiful
This is a beautiful tribute to your daughter, excellent write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Thank you raingoddess for your lovely words
Always appreciate you reading
~sugar~
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*sigh*
I suddenly feel very somber reading this. Terrific material here. I am terribly sorry about your daughter. By the way, glad you liked my comment on your other poem. Great job, as always.
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I appreciate you reading Jaime
I know she is with me
Your friend ~sugar~
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So Very Sad
This is stunningly sad. A very heartfelt and heartwrenching piece of writing from deep inside of you. Your emotions pour through in this piece. As does your pain and anguish. But rest assured, she is with you always, even if you do not believe that she is, she is with you.
Wayne
xxx
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You are a true friend hun
Thank you for being there and understanding
Love you ~sugar~
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A VERY SAD & EMOTIONAL PIECE - TO SAY THE LEAST!
The death of a small child alway brings tears of pain and sorrow to anyone with a heart and soul - and particularly to his or her Mother who feels a pain and emptiness that none of us could ever imagine. It makes me sad to hear that you have been sad today, dear friend. Your daughters essence is everywhere as you know - in the many wonders of nature - and always deep inside your maternal heart and soul!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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You are a friend in a million Earl
You are right my friend she is everywhere
Love you ~sugar~
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I echo Pif's words sugar, my heart goes out to you, I can imagine nothing worse than losing a child, whatever their age.
Be strong and you have my love...Sue
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Oh Sue
Thank you so very much
I'm just feeling very sad today
Love ~sugar~
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awwwww
sugar, wow, I had no idea sis
I commend you for writing this piece of your life and sharing it with us. This took a lot and I think that it's wonderful that you have found comfort somewhat in writing about your most deepest pain.
Beautiful, sis
Just Beautiful.....
Emotional Ephiphany...today
sorry
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I will cry with you Piff
Just feeling sad
Thank you for being you
Love ~sugar~
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