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Mistaken

You must have me confused with someone else
I am not the person who made your life hell
Or maybe I was but I am different now

I no longer seek advice from other people
And I don't have to hide myself in the crowd
Afraid of what they may say

The girl you used to know was so self absorbed in herself
That is why she was afraid to let you go
She was afraid of being alone in the world

But that was almost two years ago that it happened
It's ancient history between the two of us
Of course that doesn't mean that we can't still be friends

You never come near me as if I have something wrong with me
I don't, so why won't you come in front of me
Are you afraid that something might still be there

I still want us to talk, but you have to make the move
I've tried to many times and failed
Until that day comes, I will ignore you

Pretending that we never were
And never will be
So about that girl you asked about

I'm sorry
You must have mistaken me for her

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Written October 8th, 2003

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  • the finer point
    October 12, 2003
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    holy cow!!! haha that was... (searching for word searching for word ah HAH!) UNBELIEVABLY SPECTACULARLY AWESOMELY BEAUTIFULLY WONDERFUL!!! (ok so i cheated, that was 5 words o well) awesome job writin, and i love the first stanza! kudos for JesusFreak

    in Christ,
    Evan

  • SirHob
    October 11, 2003
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    Wow! awesome poem! really cool the way you wrote it... the fist line in the second stanza could use some work... i don't think you need the last word... or maybe keep that word and erace the third from last..... any way awesome poem! please keep up the good work!


  • Missing-Sarah
    October 11, 2003
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    Oh i really like this! its really well written and amazing!! thanks for your wonderful comment on my poem, it was much appreciated! Thanks for sharing!!

    Sarah


  • moonlitmirror
    October 11, 2003
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    This is great!! It reminds me of a friend I've had for a few years who used to be like that, but then she changed for the better and we're great close friends now. Really strong peice, it had a nice flow to it. Thanks for sharing...

    ~*~blessings~*~

    ~rora


  • FallingAngel
    October 11, 2003
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    that is great! I love it^_^ it says something to me... i not shere what but i will find out...it kinda scares me...it makes me think about me and my boyfrind.....*sighs* i will go thro that door whin i come to it.....i just hope love and happyness will come of it...Great wirte!

  • Real Freedom
    October 9, 2003
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    Hey Friend:
    WOW!!! This is very powerful. Deep very deep. Keep up all the great work and thanks for sharing

    Love Ya Friend
    Brandon

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