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Lost?

Help!Help,

I yell into the dead of night

I'm running around this maze of lies.

It seems that I helped build this

Twisting my untruthful tongue

Creating wall after wall of misleading words

Help me!

I can't find my way out

As I wander through life as something else

Is this the real you?

The wind seems to whisper

Questions that make me doubt my self.

The moon shines down on red liquid

Dripping from my arms like the lies from my mouth

How did this happen?

I ask myself.

How did I go this far?

Pretending to be this when instead,

I'm something else

The blood drops to the white ground creating something

It brings me to reality.

The blood is like the truth.

I was waiting for it to happen

I wonder where these lies came from.

Like blood?

Free?Always there?

Or like Tears?

Held in?

I see a fire

Calling me to the world I once lived in

Without mistruths

Without the sorrow I feel

I'm no longer

Lost

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I felt lost this morning

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  • Cheeseypoof
    November 21, 2007
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    This is so effin awesome tina! I'm so proud of you. the emotion in this is so strong, it's put together beautifully. You've grown so much as a writer, it's amazing. This is by far my favorite piece you've written. I love it so much. Keep it up you!


  • Midnight Lace
    October 16, 2007

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    Well done my friend. I liked where you took this reader's mind and thoughts. Great emotion and imagery in this. Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you. Keep that pen handy dear poet. ~Midnight Lace


  • Para-Dressage
    October 14, 2007
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    awesum