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Epiphany

As a child of
nine, my first
Epiphany,

came when

Desiderada

was given to

me.

 

I realized then

and there,

that I had the

right to be here.

 

Just as the stars

and trees,

the universe

belongs to me.

 

Interconnected

through time

and space,

we all share

an equal place.

 

My mission in

life to me

was shown,

when I received

that special poem.

 

I try to practice

what I "preach"

activly I like to

teach;

 

Tolerance, love,

understanding

and care,

 

for all beings

living here.

 

We all have

a right to

be on this

Earth,

 

It starts before

our actual birth.

 

Energy forms

and makes us

whole.

 

Love and peace

must be our

goal.

 

I believe if we

live right,

eventually we

become

The Light.

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  • ScarletO gold member
    October 14, 2007

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    Quite beautifully written with an air of light. The light that we wish and love so much is a promise in the end. To be the same and enjoy the light. Very nicely written.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 14, 2007

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    Very beautifully written and a such a true piece.
    We all have a right to be here on this earth. Well done and good luck to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826

    • ScarletO gold member
      October 14, 2007
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      Hey Jeremy,,,I noticed you have read most of the entries for this contest. I think you should enter too. Seems you are interested in what everyone has to say.


    • islekine gold member
      October 14, 2007
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      Mahalo Nui Loa!

      I truely believe we would all be better off,
      without some of the boundries set by organized religion. I live in a very diversified part of the world, and we all get along, amazingly well.....I believe every religion has its good points. I find it difficult, as I get older to believe any one of them has all the answers.....boy! I got started.....
      *PEACE*