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[ I feel for you ]

I feel for you

but you are not there

I dream of you

cause that's only fair

You left me alone in this

Cold,cold world

With No one to hold me

Nobody there

Please Help me and tell me

that you always cared

For all that you've done

and all that you did

Tell me your sorry and don't tell a fib

Because your not here and I'm all alone

I'll cut and I'll cut til'

I'm in the Zone

 

 

 

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  • XxnevertrustxX
    October 15, 2007

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    good effort,i love it that you arnt faking itd there you can tell by the way you write.its really good..


  • girliebud
    October 14, 2007
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    this is really good i like it