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Sweet Erin I Miss You So

The day you were born
angel sung on high
my life was complete
but then you died

I read a poem just today
that made me feel
the hurt that day
Its been 3 sad years

My love for you remains
for ever and a day
my heart holds your hand
as you play with angels

Your loss is deep
it cuts me to the bone
makes me cry
I miss you so.




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Erin my love I miss you so.

Life is so good

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  • goalsv
    October 14, 2007

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    Brings a tear to my eyes! Lovely poem about losing a child. The hurt must be deep, and really never goes away.


    • ebaby
      December 2, 2007
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      still brings tears to my eyes mostly every day, I just dont understand why life is so short for the inocent child and long lived for the person dealing with bad health, a long history of drugs, booze and divorce what the heck is a matter with this picture??