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We are All Needed

The colors of peace,
Shining upon the world.
Each color a person,
A special part of the earth.
Without a color, it would be
Incomplete, like a rainbow
Without its colors.
The peace would be gone,
If just one person
Left, like a color leaving
The sky or a rainbow.
If just one color was missing,
Everything would fall apart.
We, each and every one of us,
Must work together, so all
The colors stay together,
And peace is mantained.

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  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    November 3, 2007

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    "Each color a person,
    A special part of the earth."

    This poem shows a definite social sensitivity; nicely done.


  • Midnight Lace
    October 16, 2007
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    You have delivered some truly thought provoking ideas in this wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you. Congratulations to you on your honorable mention, I personally feel that it is well deserved. Keep that pen handy dear poet. ~Midnight Lace


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    October 15, 2007

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    Oh nicely done...yes yes yes..it is in the diversity that there is contrast that gives depth and beauty. nicely done.