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Fallen Angel

Blood dripping onto the ground
Mixing with the scattered white feathers
Staining the green grass
Feet cut on the shards of glass
That was littered every where
The red liquid streaming
Down this naked form
Battle wounds viewed every where
And those once pearly white wings
Nearly ripped to shreds

A horrific battle fought from above
Has now taken coarse
To the battle field of earth
Fires strewn about the land
Demons dying or already dead
Angels flying up above
Thinking they’ll have the advantage
Only to quickly learn
This to be untrue

Fear racing through the hearts
Of many to see such a sight
Death being spread across the bloody land
From high to low
Screams of pain and fury
Could be heard afar

But just blood spattered angel
Watched from afar
Hidden by the darkness
His once beautiful wings
No longer to be seen
In one hand he had his left one
And on the ground lay the other
His eyes filled with sadness
And pain
So much destruction and hate
He felt no hope left for the world
No more light, no more beauty
His soul forever lost
To the obliteration of his home
No more self-preservation
So more sanity
And more structure

Author notes

This was actually a dream that I had a while ago.

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  • Tripple-HeadedDevil
    October 15, 2007

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    HA HA HA now THATS my kinda writing! i love the vividness of this one...very well put.

    "To the obliteration of his home
    No more self-preservation
    So more sanity
    And more structure"

    the ending was so well put together that it just sums everything up in such a way that it peices all of reality together and then tears it apart again. amazing.

    great job and keep it up!

    love ya!

    YAMI


  • takemypainaway
    October 14, 2007
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    I like this its pain felt in a suttle way!!