in a lovely garden
enriched with the innocence
of nature
filled with flower
in an array of colours
amongst them stands
a beautiful faery
her skin so smooth
with hair in a wavy mass
her gown flows
all the way down
till it reaches the Earth
holding a bird
on her arm
she looks into her soul
to find what she was missing
for so long now
an escape from the real world
her outstretched wings
are netted by her past
she carries her troubles away
when she flies
but now, she wants to find solace
and in her garden
she has found it
in this beautiful moment
she finds it all worthwhile
what a day!
Author notes
inspired by the picture "innocence"~
love is a battlefield
option 2~
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Comments
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"her skin so smooth
with hair in a wavy mass
her gown flows
all the way down
till it reaches the Earth"
i just love how this stanza painted such a beautiful picture of the faery..
there was great imagery here, which i liked best of all
one thing though, what's "inot" in stanza 4 suppose to mean?
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Very pretty. I liked how you divided the stanza's. It gave it a very artistic look with out interupting the flow of the poem. I loved the imagery. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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