the sand is conventionally ambivalent
you know this fact
then what is the infer to step in
and if you stepped in
then no need to elapse the footprints
as you may be expecting it
while landing rear
though not certain
they will be obtainable
as the sand is conventionally ambivalent...
Author notes
The most difficult task is to maintain the relations especially when you are desperate and wish to maintain but you lose because of the quality of principles which we persue in life..while life itself is very soft to care for...
A contest entry
- In The Company Of Compassion by CarolDesjarlais.
900 points, ended October 15, 2007, 7 entries
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I feel a deep sense of understanding on a personal level... thank you for putting it so eloquently...
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SAND IS LIKE TIME AND FRIENDSHIPS, IF ONE IS NOT CAREFUL THEY WILL BOTH SLIP THROUGH ONE'S FINGER'S UNNOTICED, UNTIL IT IS TOO LATE.
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This gave me a sad feeling...we are so unimortant that even a footstep in sand is soon erased. Ty for entering.
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Excellent choice, sand...and your adjective, ambivalent...Good luck in the contest. Peace.
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Excellent!
I love the idea of the sand being ambivalent. Once we step in, there is not going back. The relationship has to go on, based on ambivalence. Congrats, and best regards.
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