Eternal you're in my heart
However,
The wait sometimes injures heart,
Longing destroys joy of living,
makes life hard,
Sometimes difficult to surpass.
Never be able to love someone
as I love you.
Sometimes suffocates me
Either to laugh or cry
Time to retreat.
But despite everything
Am a human being
needs like anyone other...fondness
a very little of attention,
a very little love,
and, therefore,
apologise to you.
Fondness, love
and attention of a person.
Not you now,
Don't even love you
Needing to live a life.
Sorry..Very Sorry !
A contest entry
- PAYING IT FORWARD FOR SHAZ Prompt Sorry by Swan song.
2100 points, ended October 28, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Not to bad at all this was a good poem thanks for entering.


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Unrequited Love
Very emotional with an undercurrent of anger. Well done! Good luck in the contest.


