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Very Sorry !

Eternal you're in my heart
However,
The wait sometimes injures heart,
Longing destroys joy of living,
makes life hard,
Sometimes difficult to surpass.

Never be able to love someone
as I love you.
Sometimes suffocates me
Either to laugh or cry
Time to retreat.

But despite everything 
Am a human being
needs like anyone other...fondness
a very little of attention,
a very little love,
and, therefore,
apologise to you.

Fondness, love
and attention of a person.
Not you now,
Don't even love you
Needing  to live a life.

Sorry..Very Sorry ! 

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 27, 2007
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    Not to bad at all this was a good poem thanks for entering.


  • malkinpuss
    October 14, 2007
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    Unrequited Love

    Very emotional with an undercurrent of anger. Well done! Good luck in the contest.