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Two sides

One last pitch
cheering crowd
but broken dreams

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  • azure85 gold member
    October 14, 2007

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    One last pitch
    cheering crowd
    but broken dreams

    Yes, there has to be a winner, and the other side is broken hearted. Your haiku expresses this well, you can feel it within your words.