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Haiku 51

I gaze at the water
to see a reflection of
my soul's strength to give.

A contest entry

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  • Dlvvanzor
    October 15, 2007

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    Thanks for entering!
    I wish you the best of luck.
    I hope you had fun.

    -Dlvvanzor (Like my haiku comment for the haiku contest? lol)


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 14, 2007
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    Nice, good luck!


  • horsecowgirl
    October 14, 2007

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    nicely put but lines 1 and 3 both have 6 syllables. i would really fix that before the contest is over. i think i just thought of my contest! (sorry of track) this is a powerful haiku definently describing your soul's strenght. best wishes in the contest! keep up the fabulous writing!!!!
    ~horsecowgirl~