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I'm Lost

I stand in the centre of my destiny,

At the focal point within my future self,

Choices coming from nowhere,

Doors stubbornly refusing to open,

This crossroads leading me nowhere,

No clue which path to take,

No helping hand to guide me through,

Silence enslaving my soul,

Where do I go?

Help me, guide me, tell me,

I'm lost.

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I seem to have lost my poetic mojo and this is all I can come up with at the moment to show how I feel.

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  • captain howdy
    October 17, 2007

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    "Choices coming from nowhere,

    Doors stubbornly refusing to open,

    This crossroads leading me nowhere,

    No clue which path to take,
    "

    We all feel this way at some point or another...before I joined this site, I had been through at least six months of no ides. Just keep your chin up!