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Present?

He gave me a present
All wrapped up and pretty
Said, 'Here, for you'
With a smile on his face

And all I could do
Was wonder why at all
He'd give me a present...
Do i deserve it?

I havent yet opened it...
Im not sure what i'll find
But it waits for me







waiting...



















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blaaaaaah.
sucky =D

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  • Walking Tall
    October 15, 2007
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    interesting idea
    it's not sucky
    it's really good
    i liek it =)
    seej