Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

ventricle ablaze

Missing image

~*~

follow

me into this

paradise, given to

us a new creation, behold

a gift

~*~

silent

promises are

spoken, auricle vibes

rippling, singing harmony in

heaven

~*~

enter

into mortal

being, dispose of all

sacrafices, entities dreams,

longing

~*~

kindle

desire in hearts

maze, illuminate this

ventricle of love, setting me

ablaze 

~*~

flutters

within my soul,

a tender touch upon

your face, eternity calls us,

homeward

~*~

 

 

Author notes

Prompt:

 

Picture inspired

 

An entry in Round One of,

*Sensual Quills*

 

http://allpoetry.com/column/show/2338572

 

Each line depicts, what I feel it is going to be like,

when we return to earth after the 7 year Tribulation.

After spending the 7 years in heaven while the

Anti-Christ trys to rule, then God destroys all of

those people who took the Beasts mark, 666.

We who return with Jesus, will spend eternity

 with Jesus on the new earth.  A sensual write

about coming back as the spirit of the dove

with those who were with us in heaven. 

 

A

 

Cinquain Chain

 

Syllable count:

 

2-4-6-8-2

2-4-6-8-2

2-4-6-8-2

2-4-6-8-2

2-4-6-8-2

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 8 of 8

  • Cupcrazy gold member
    January 11, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    A beautiful write Bear, very uplifting and an excellent use of form. It has a natural flow and is filled with emotion. Thanks for this great entry. Hugs, bunny


  • Celticmoon
    November 21, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Bear I could not have asked for a more brilliant piece to accompany this picture. This is one of my favorite pictures to lift my spirit when it is feeling low. I humbly thank you for doing it such an amazing justice as you have. Marvelous!

    Blessings
    Bel


    • Arkbear gold member
      November 21, 2007
      Edit | Reply

      Bel Darlin ~

      The thanks goes to you my Dear ~

      I felt such a Peace penning for this Picture ~

      Thank you for that opportunity ~

      It's good to see you again Hun,


      Happy Thanksgiving to you & your Family ~

      Bear ~



  • LadyLavender gold member
    October 22, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    Glows!

    bear, truly a splendid write.. each word, Glows!


  • ZachP
    October 14, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    "homeward" ... that word just seems to tie everything together... and it's so true, because this path, does, indeed, lead to our eternal home.

    Nicely scribed, Master Bear


  • Patpowers silver member
    October 14, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT! I am glad you and I are poem friends. I liked what I read and the picture that matches it! THANKS again!!


  • Floorboards
    October 14, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    I love this, it's like a call to arms, absolutely beautiful, very easy on the eye.
    Great work, Bear,
    Floorboards.

1 - 8 of 8