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New Friends/Nuwe Vriende

Missing image
are you new, my friend?
playing hearts for the first time
with love's acceptance?


ah! why this divine knowing
we're together -- forever?

is jy nuut, my vriend?
hartspel vir die eerste keer
aanvaar in liefde?

a! waarom die godswete
ons is al vir ewig saam?

Author notes

I presented a workshop to generate poetry in the endopathic approach of KREATIV at the Bloemhof High School in Stellenbosch, South Africa, on Saturday, 13 October, 2007. With me on the photo is Rita and Marlene, two of the teachers, who assisted me with the initial preparations. Baie dankie, Marlene, vir jou geesdriftige meeleef en liefde; dit is 'n plesier om met jou saam te werk. Rita, ek is so bly dat ons kon ontmoet. Vriende vir ewig! Liefde, Myra

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  • PerVirtuous
    October 14, 2007
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    No. I am your oldest friend. Been with you since before the begining. So I ask you, how is me?

  • Bad Bill
    October 14, 2007

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    Smaoinigh álainn, a chara! Beautiful thoughts, my friend. I've not had much chance to visit AP recently, due to problems with my computer (I'm using a friend's PC at the moment), but hopefully that will be solved soon. It's always a pleasure to read your work.

    Warmest,
    Bill


  • michellemybelle gold member
    October 14, 2007

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    lovely words...it is one of life's greatest blessings, souls connecting, it is such a joy when we find another to connect to!
    Thank you for sharing!
    blessings,
    Michelle


  • rite
    October 14, 2007

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    Whenever we make new friends we become new again ourselves perhaps. The excitement of meeting a soul who shares with us many dear things, among which one overpowers all, is like a spark triggering new worlds that exist inside us. I am happy to read this trip gave you so much reward. You are indeed on a guided tour in humanity. Ack,

    Chris


  • FransB gold member
    October 14, 2007

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    Ai Myra, die foto spreek van samesyn en liefde - al so bietjie formeel geneem! Min woorde wat baie te vertel het.

    Myra, the photo says it all - it depicts togetherness and love - even if the photo is a little bit formal.

    Kan sien julle het dit geniet. Frans.

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