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Unwanted soul

Unwanted child born into hatred
Why couldn't you be torn from me
Your were the reason for the loss of my love
So you will not have love
All you will know is hate
The hate I have for you
Oh why couldn't you dissapear
You mistake of my flesh and blood
If I can't love you who could love a thing like you
You can only destroy those things of love and purity
You horrible creature from my womb
Why couldn't I rid myself of you
Why do you even exist at all?
These are the words
I hear from my mother's mouth
As I drop to my knees and cry
Realizing that which was responsible for my life
Wanted me to be no life at all.

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  • sleepingINblackRain
    November 6, 2007
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    Interesting, it seems many mothers know not of love. Nice write


  • Tarja
    October 14, 2007

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    Yeah.. don't you hate that feeling. My mother and I have a similar relationship. I actually thought for a second maybe I wrote this... Nice piece... very dramatic.