My child
My love
i feel your kicks and I know
that you are there
and soon you will be in my arms
i hear your heart beat
and i know that soon you will be on my cheast
hearing mine
My child
My love
you are here and all i can do
is say your name
and look into your eyes
knowing that you are something that i made
knowing that you will always be in my heart
no matter what should happen
My child
My love
i cant wait for the day
that you will tell me that you are having a child of your own
then you will know the happieness
that i feel when i see you
the love that comes when you smile
the tears that rain down when you say mommy
the feeling of being compleat
My child
My love
My baby
My heart
Remember that I love you
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i hope this works. I lost my little girl 2 monthes ago...still born and this is what i would have said to her. A child is a blessing and you my dear are blessed. Kiss that baby every night.
Love always
Diamond
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"and i know that soon you will be on my cheast" - "cheast" I believe would be "chest".
"i cant wait for the day" - "cant" would be "can't".
"the feeling of being compleat" - "compleat" would be "complete".
A lovely poem that you have written here.
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Indeed they are and I wish to have some one day. I always feared I'd lose them.
I'm so sorry love, my heart bleeds for you and I'm about to start crying for you too because this hurts me so much.
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