I'm counting down the days until you come
The best of friends we'll become
No matter if you are a girl or a boy
My heart will be filled with joy
Mommy says that when you get here
I'll get to hold you very near
Tiny hands and feet
I promise to be very sweet
For even though we have yet to meet
Without you our family will be incomplete
So hurry up and get here
And I love you is what I will declare
A contest entry
- Show a little love for Kids! by Theroseislovely.
475 points, ended October 18, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Aww this is so lovely... she'll (he'll) be so proud of having a big sis. like you... best wishes~ Alex
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Lovely!
Wow, this is so beautiful. I love the wording, seeming so innoncent, but still slightly deep at the same time. I love the second verse. -
An amazingly tender and beautiful poem.. Brilliantly written with befitting imagery and well chosen words..
An excellent piece! Well done!
Love n Hugz n All that Jazz xx Ev
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I couldn't edit my original comment to add these thoughts, this piece is wonderful and very heart-felt. I got a little emotional reading this piece. I thank you for your entry!
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Sean, says he likes this. He enjoyed this very special poem. I wish you a-lot of luck.
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