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Street Scene

In a jeepney

I delight myself wih a
mentholated candy.

Caress by smokes making lines

Creating such vexing sensation

I sit back,
Watched the traffic aid
and the gleaming traffic lights

Just an ordinary weekday.

Author notes

Inspired by the poem "Innocent" by Aigeanta Faol

Word Bank

Jeepney

A public utility vehicle in the Philippines.

heres an image:

http://www.startour.pe.kr/event_honey/honeymoon/Pil-Manila-Jeepney.JPG

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  • sense surreal gold member
    July 30, 2008

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    realistic
    i like this kind of scenes
    the urbanite and hectic feel they give

    Manilang-manila nga