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Hang Your Flesh

Don't you enjoy the smell
of cooking flesh
in the stove?

Don't you enjoy the smell
of bubbling blood
on the stove eye?

I enjoyed stabbing you,
blowing out your brains,
sucking out your liver,
with my psychotic tongue.

I love loop holes inside your ears,
but when your blood finishes,
my love for it disappears,
cause I have nothing left,
but a big pot of blood,
on which to feed my Dogs,
for I will hang your flesh
up in my bedroom, fucker!

Author notes

I hope you enjoy this piece of writing, Darci Nightmare and others. I would have made this longer and more descriptive if I had more time, but this is what I could musker in one day...

Enjoy!

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Comments


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 13, 2007
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    Ehh gruesome but a very good write I enjoyed the spooky write keep up the great work


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    October 23, 2007

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    Wow, this is quite a dark and creepy piece!
    I hope I never make you mad! lol
    Great job with this one and keep up the
    wonderful work here! Best of luck to you
    with it in the contest!




    Jeremy0826


  • Digital-coma
    October 14, 2007

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    Wow

    very dark and gripping! ABSOLUTELY stunning and amazing, i love it in every way......especially the hatred and strong emotion. THIS IS HOT AS FUCK!!!!!!