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Rebekka

How do I love thee?
the sounds of the emotion are a Gulf's stream offshore
psalms of Ezekial's dimensions given unto constructions
of tomorrows
I do love you Rebekka well and truly
an amazing flow of free verse
such as my heart discovered.

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  • grannyeri gold member
    October 15, 2007

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    What a neat way to profess your love for someone, write a poem here and feature it so all can read it too. Starts off like one other famous poem, but then takes off on it's own course. Very creative and unique write you have penned here. Hope she sees this and understands what you want her to know.


  • horsecowgirl
    October 15, 2007
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    this is different. i like it! keep up the fabulous writing!
    ~horsecowgirl~