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[ Zebra ]

Zebra
standing
in the jungle
river bed

A bath reveals
black and white
stripes

In a list

A contest entry

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 22, 2007
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    uniquenees means more to me then the form lol. and this has both. great job.
    best wishes
    Tory


  • delightfulmess silver member
    October 17, 2007

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    Very unique septolet.... Enjoyed this
    well done and thank you for entering the contest


    delila


    • Pollycheck
      October 17, 2007
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      delightfulmess

      Thank so much. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem.


  • azure85 gold member
    October 13, 2007

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    LOL A nice wash in the river, and their stripes would stand out so well! A delightful shortform indeed!


    • Pollycheck
      October 13, 2007
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      Susie

      I just thought that I would have a little fun with this one.

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