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Feral Longing

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I feel the beast rage through my loins

and this aching need that washes over me

surges through my veins like a lust-starved god

sadistic pleasures indulged in heated embrace

release in waves of orgasmic sacrifice...

appeasing the primal hunger of masterful demands

in these chains I'm forever bound

hunting in the labyrinth of night

left unsated, enslaved by obsessions hand

thirsting for the rush of spilled desires

sharing in the feast of feral longing

among darkened shades of crimson hue

on lust stained sheets like blood stained snow

lay shattered bits of tainted love

tell-tale reminders of the animal within


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  • leo2
    October 18, 2007

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    I'm just in awe of the entire presentation. The beast within me is always hungry for meals like this. If this doesn't merit 'metal' nothing will.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • Midnight Lace
    October 15, 2007

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    I think you totally ran away with the image here. It's hard to tell which was made for which... your words for the image or the oimage for your words. A perfect creation of poetry and good taste. I wish you the best of luck in your contest. ~Midnight Lace


  • TXCowgirl
    October 15, 2007
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    I must say you have a talent for capturing the images that you post with your masterfully, powerfully, and creative words. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, and being able to see it related to the picture and vice cersa. Best of wishes dear poet in your contest.
    ~TXCowgirl


  • Swan song gold member
    October 14, 2007
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    This was really awesome Took my breath away!


  • Dalaney gold member
    October 13, 2007
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    mmmm...yes, this got my attention. lane

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