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[ the wild mustang runs ]

the wild mustang runs
always free and unbridled
as the eagle soars
an animal's manitou
lives to thrive in this freedom

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A contest entry

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 22, 2007

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    oh yes i love horses and i love this piece. another masterpiece penned by your hands.
    bravo.
    best wishes
    Tory


  • delightfulmess silver member
    October 17, 2007
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    Love this excellent tanka....
    Thank you for entering the contest


    delila


    • Pollycheck
      October 17, 2007
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      deligtfulmess

      Thank you for your very nice comments. They are truly appreciated.


  • azure85 gold member
    October 13, 2007

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    Very cool images within this poem, the animal's spirit always needs to be free. You described it well, good luck in the contest!

    • Pollycheck
      October 13, 2007
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      Susie

      Thank you so much for your kind words. I agree that not only animals but humans also need to keep their spirit free.

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