Your love makes me whole
I just can't live without you
There is just something about you
That won't let me forget you.
You are always on my mind
When you tell me you love me,
I believe you.
But why can't you look me in the eyes
And tell me its true?
Your words are killing me softly.
So softly that the blackness of everything
Is taking over me.
You can't see it but I can feel it.
Every minute of everyday the pain
Consumes my body and my heart,
Making it bleed and scarring it.
I don't know whats going on in your mind
But whatever it is, why can't you tell me?
Why can't you sit here with me and
Pour your feelings out to me?
Please tell me the truth of why you
Keep lying to me.
I know you are worried about me when
I get dark-minded but please, just be
Honest.
A contest entry
- "killing me softly with his words" by Viyanna Rosemarie.
550 points, ended October 21, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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the phrase is not seen by this author. if it is here, i am not catching it at all. the phrase itself is what i am looking for. viyanna
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"Your love makes me whole" <---This is the phrase I am talking about. It the first line.
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as per the contest rules you are suppose to include the contest title into your write. i will give you some time to do this before i judge the contest. i wish you well in getting this done. viyanna rosemarie
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I thought I did. Im my first sentence/line
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