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triple ripples
on cold surface
--baseball in stream bed
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Author notes
1st way: HOMERUN!!!! out of the stadium~
2nd way: when you feel that baseball is too though and feel like giving it up. (thus you threw your baseball into the stream)
giggle.
which ever your mood.
A contest entry
- Baseball Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended October 27, 2007, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this can be read 2 ways
Comments
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^_^ wow, very short and to the point
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Double touchdown?????????????????????????????
I loved it...btw..do they have touchdowns at baseball games????
I have no idea, but your poem is great
and worth a touchdown because that could mean winning too
Hope all is well with you my bemissed friend
XXJeannette
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Aww wow, I love the first line, I like the double meaning too
. Good luck in the contest and take care
Never ♥ -
triple ripples
on cold surface
--baseball in stream bed
Great haiku, and I enjoyed your double hit interpretation in your author's notes! Nice baseball-ku!
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