Even though, you will no longer be here,
I still think of you.
I fill my mind with every moment you've given me,
just to realize you were only here... sometimes.
Guess I never filled you the way you've filled me,
guess I'm not cut out for you anymore.
Maybe we were the wrong couple to start with,
maybe I let my heart get between my head... again.
When I said "raise me high"I didn't meant it for you to drop me down,
I meant it to touch the sky knowing you're there willing to catch me if I fell.
When I whispered your name, I wasn't trying to indulge you, I was trying to make you stay.
Even though I am not as pretty as you hoped me to be,
in the world of love, feelings is the real thing that's involved, not body types,
guess you see it the other way... ohh well... it was good to have you.... somedays...
It was good to kiss you... sometimes...
it was good to wish.... every day and so...
it was good to think of you... when you never thought of me...
guess we're not cut out to be couples nor friends,
guess were just meant to be strangers at a bachelor's fest...
Author notes
well I chose three categories without looking heh. I chose love poems, sad poems, and dedications. hope you don't mind.
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A contest entry
- SOMETIMES: A word to use for this poem. by Angel Full Of Hurt.
666 points, ended October 28, 2007, 16 entries
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Comments
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Well written piece
I felt as though you were speaking your heart and knowing the feeling from a time in my life I would say its great for you hit all the bases of so many womens ups and downs in our life .
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Love it, as I love all your poetry Desiree, of course
I noticed you like to write about the same thing. Or rather, you don't like writing about it, but you can't help but to do it. The strongest emotions are what show the most.
Wonderful poem Desiree
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yes I tend to write about the same person and the same feelings. guess I can't get him out of my heart. I believe writing about it let's me take a break and try to forget him or at least let myself know that he's an asshole. thank you for your comment Allen.
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