I look into your eyes,
I see the hunger lie within,
a hunger for my heart and soul,
A hunger for a sin.
You kiss my lips
hard then soft,
your hands move slowly down,
as i take your shirt off.
My fingers explore forbidden fruits,
as they move lower down,
feeling the lust you have for me,
and hearing your lustful sounds.
You remove the barrier between us,
in the form of evil clothes,
lay me down on the bed,
he lust we feel is shown.
You're fingers trace
a line upon my breast,
sending shivers through my body,
as i touch upon your chest.
You kiss my neck,
suck and bite,
trace a heart with your tongue,
your naked form such a sight,
Your lips move lower,
until they reach
the part of me that screams,
drowning out all your speech.
You tongue, it flickers
across my heart
as you plunge it into me,
we will never be apart.
you whisper things in my ear,
you love me more than life,
I feel your being inside of me,
as you truly make me your wife.
You thrust in and out,
getting deeper every time,
until all i feel,
is ecstasy that blinds.
A feeling like no other,
an explosion of our love,
we lie together afterwards,
as angel applaud us from above.
I never felt such pleasure,
I never felt such love,
but as i lie here with you now,
I know that i am loved
Author notes
option 4
well i dnt want to make love to him, i do..you know..make love to him, still counts though right?
it's truly magical
#4
erotica...
about wen me n ma bf make love..
A contest entry
- E & S.............An Adult Contest by Dalaney.
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i absoloutely loved this!!! it was wonderful and i really felt the passion and intensity in this... i deffinately give you an 11 from 1-10... i really loved all of the depcriptions.... its like i could see everything... thank you, keep up the good work and good luck!
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A delicious, savory piece that brings such tantilizing images to the mind and leave one drooling in anticipation for a second helping. Best wishes to you in the contest and keep that pen handy dear poet.
♥ Touchof1der
PS: I did notice that in the last line of the second stanza you have... "he lust we feel is shown". I think perhaps you meant THE lust...
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yeah, it counts and yes, its magical Lane
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