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An intimate act

Shivers running down my spine
Pulses merged as legs entwine
I can't keep from loving you
With all the special things you do
Holding tightly while in bed
Just support your sleepy head
Teasing slowly all night long
Singing low our special song
Arms that wrap and hold us near
I loved you blowing in my ear!

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2. Write a poem about a specific sensual act

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    October 14, 2007

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    There is such a sweet simplistic beauty to be found within your well chosen words here. Best wishes to you in the contest and keep that pen handy dear poet.
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • Dalaney gold member
    October 13, 2007
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    Very well done.
    Lane


  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 13, 2007
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    Good luck in the contest

    Well written sensual poem