I can feel them crawling up my window,
I hear them marching down my bed.
I can feel their hairy legs crawl over me. Bitting me deeply.
Felling unconsious of such fear for them,
almost agonizing from their appearence,
still remembering the day I encountered them. Arachnophobia.
I feel their small and senseless sound around my dark and lonely room.
approching every moment even more, trying to set loose of their venom on me.
wanting me to be their dinner, their meal. Phobia of me.
Soaked up in sweat, I have awaken from such a nightmare,
just to find out, it's already started,
they're here, they've started to haunt the ones I hold dear.
Author notes
option 4. my fear.
Its a short poem and it's a freeverse. hope you like it!
by XvampireeyesXX
I read the rules!
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LucyLightning- option 5
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option 1: contest by Romily
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A contest entry
- Scary Options Contest! by neoladyem.
300 points, ended October 30, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell Me Your Phobia!!!! by ShadowEyes.
450 points, ended November 1, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 6 OPTIONS...I HOPE YOU WILL LOVE IT, PREWRITES ARE ALLOWED by Romily.
380 points, ended November 27, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - [& Enchanted Are We Dancing Like Voo Doo Doll Silhouettes Between The Trees] by LucyLightning.
1600 points, ended December 11, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Phobia - What's Yours? by xxRainbowDawnxx.
433 points, ended May 1, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I know many people who have this phobia and though it's popular, it doesn't make it any harder to avoid, considering they are all around us. I can't say I am afraid of spiders, but I am squeemish around them, as I don't like them. Some people are just flat out terrified of them and to be honest, I can understand why as they do send shivers down your spine.
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i like this. =DDDD
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I feel their small and senseless sound around my dark and lonely room.
approching every moment even more, trying to set loose of their venom on me.
wanting me to be their dinner, their meal. Phobia of me.......Dude, you have penned in such a way make me shivering!...good work. good luck in the contest. -
I know how this is... I have friends with this phobia... (BF's sister is one of them! lol.) I do like this... you did a wonderful job writing this. thanks for your entry... and good luck in both contests! keep up your great work!
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Haa. I think alot of people can relate to this poem. It's superb, you've capured the emotion while maybe even humorous displaying it.
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wow i should give this to my friend
shes scared of spiders too lol
great job an good luck
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Ok.....
My second worst fear, spiders ewww! Great write, far to much imagery, will be having nightmares for a week, thanks! It was Fab tho' I loved it, good luck in the contest! -
This is fanastic! I love how you use the scientfic word and you never dircetly name you fear in the poem. Instead you gave the reader a bunch of clues as to what you fear is. The detials were extremely descripted as well.
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