Who are you to tell me to quit what I love?
I worked really hard for my spot.
And you tell me to give up.
Why do you feel that its okay to insult me?
I did my best and now
Your making me feel like I'm not worth anything.
Just because your life sucks doesn't
Give you the right to ruin mine.
You tell me I am just dreaming
And I realize that at least I have a dream.
You have no right to make my life hell
Just because your life is crumbling down.
Well now I'm ending it.
This is it.
I am not letting you control my life anymore.
I am parting now from your grasp
And I hope I don't have to put up with your control again.
A contest entry
- DARK SHTUFF by Cassie fai lume.
300 points, ended November 1, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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angry emotion, good flow. good job!
good luck in my contest.
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