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What I should have done

You said you would never leave me
You would always be by my side.
But where are you?
You left me

You kissed me and said you
Loved me, but where are you?
I should have listened to my
Friends, and not let you kiss me
And to move on

I should have, then my
Heart wouldn’t be broken
I should have just moved on
Then I wouldn’t have this
Weird feeling that you are still here

I’m sorry but I must move on
And you can’t be in my life
I need to find someone
Who will not break
My heart.

Author notes

i made this poem while i was talking to my friend(PoetBoy),and we were talking about love and stuff, so ya hope you like it(thanks)

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  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    October 15, 2007

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    Yay, I got to type this!!
    And it's wonderful!!!!
    Why?
    Because I typed it!!
    And because you wrote it, you awesome poetry writer, you!


  • Innocent Evil
    October 14, 2007
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    Go tina!! w00t! I love it!


  • PoetBoy2008
    October 13, 2007

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    Beautiful

    it's a start to letting this guy go you can't let him hold you from having a real relationship one that will last. it's a great poem.