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Just a Dance

The atmosphere is thick
with music and dance.

Bodies moving like liquid
in time with the beat.

Fast pace blinking
of hot white strobe.

Illuminating the body
to a slower paced skip.

Flashes of color
lime green and red.

Whipped in the air
by the dancers.

Forming a river
of luminescence.

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