Rough and tough, he's ready to fight
and be forsed to saty up all night
He's strong and brave
And every life he will try to save
But dig a little deeper, and you will see
thats not always who he'll be
Yes he's way stronger than most
but at night he'll hold me close
And yes he's trained to kill
that does not mean every thing he sees he will,
Many may not understand
in what positions my man can land
This soldier is my man
and i'll always be his biggest fan
His soft inside is what i love
It's truly that of a dove
He'll fight and get muddy
but right now he got a new buddy
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puupy
A contest entry
- MILITARY----PIC AND VIDEO LINKS PIC & VID INSPIRED SOME PRE-WRITES! by Beautiful-N-Broken.
600 points, ended October 16, 2007, 8 entries
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Thank you for entering my military contest. You have captured the essence of how a military man must live in two worlds at the same time.
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I really like this because I am an army wife...nice poem :]
Avec amour *~Krymsin Kyss~* -
I like it
I like the way this one closes... "he's got a new buddy."
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Very nice job with the prompt, showing they are trained to be tough yet they are still normal on the inside.
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Very sweet. Captures the picture so well. You did a terrific job on this, the best of luck in the contest!
~MissingMySoldier07~
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