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The Smell of Rain

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The smell of Rain is in the air

with anticipation for my Precious Girl.

My heart is beating faster and faster

to love her unconditionally as my complete world.

 

 

 

 

The days are counting down

when everyone will find out who she is.

She will be the girl of precious rain

that will inspire diamond droplets with a kiss.

 

 

 

 

The sky will rejoice with tears of joy.

Passion shall bloom like a garden of flowers.

This Ted E Bare will be in a trance

for the Precious Rain Girl will possess that power.

 

 

 

 

She will be a fantasy to live in dreams

as I will see her in every sparkling drop that falls.

I believe the smell of rain is all around me

as my heart and soul is willing to give all

...to the awaiting Precious Rain Girl.

 

 

 

Author notes

The PreciousRainGirl will reside at this address:

http://allpoetry.com/PreciousRainGirl

She will be found in this contest:

http://allpoetry.com/contest/2372592



This will not count towards the twelve minimum, just felt like writing a prequel!

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  • Midnight Lace
    October 16, 2007

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    I just love to read your poems about the rain. This is fitting for the weather where I am at. Its been raining for the past few days, and like you, I love the rain. I also love the smell of the air just before a good, hard rain. This was a pleasure to read.
    ~Midnight Lace


    • Ted E Bare gold member
      October 16, 2007
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      Midnight Lace, not sure if you have an entry in the contest, but I will be writing for someone for the next year as she will be dubbed as the Precious Rain Girl. I'm totally appreaiciate you enjoying my rain poems. It's a wonderful compliment!

      Ted E


  • ennovy silver member
    October 16, 2007

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    This is a beautiful write & read. You have me wondering now who this special someone is. I know you'll make an excellent choice..Rock on Ted E. rock on!................novy


    • Ted E Bare gold member
      October 16, 2007
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      Well I'm not sure who she is myself yet. However, I do have memories to reflect upon with a past Rain Girl. I will be looking forward to the Precious Rain Girl who will win the contest no matter who she is! Thank you for all of your support and lovely comment.

      Ted E


  • Tears of Roses
    October 13, 2007

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    WOW wonderful poem Ted E Bare
    the fragrance of the coming rain
    and then the sweet fresh fragrance afterwards
    Roses to you and I hope your contest
    is a great success

    Teresa

    • Ted E Bare gold member
      October 13, 2007

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      Thank you for your precious comment and the sweet wish for the contestTed E

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