I didn't mean
To be so perfect
To ruin all you worked for
To destroy your dreams
In one fell swoop
I didn't mean
To be so perfect
That you murdered me
I was perfection
My idea of a perfect person
That had too many flaws
Obviously we disagreed
A contest entry
- PAYING IT FORWARD FOR SHAZ Prompt Sorry by Swan song.
2100 points, ended October 28, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Not sure if this was intentional or not, but I've read this three or four times now, each time with a different idea of tone and perspective, and it works with all of them.
Versatile. Groovy.
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This is good! very intersting I will read this again
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Dark
I enjoyed the perspective! I have a penchant for the darker writes! Good luck in the contest!
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