Sorrow
finds me weeping
keeping jounals daily:
fantasising, remembering
enshrining our love in looseleaf binders
forever and always sorry
you chose to leave before
I shared all my
sorrow
Sadly
I find myself
reminiscing...seeing
your face, your deep-set amber eyes
lighting up my heart, your smiles laughing then
now hushed and silent trying to
find the ghost of our lost
goodbye; alone
sadly
Author notes
double rictameter on "Sorry"
A contest entry
- PAYING IT FORWARD FOR SHAZ Prompt Sorry by Swan song.
2100 points, ended October 28, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is very good and sad beautifully written Good luck in this contest No matter what your poem touched me
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Dear Poet friend,
Thank you for hosting this contest, for the Bronze handsome trophy and for the points.
LOVELIGHTPEACE
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poignant
A heartfelt write ... I have been there on occasion ... unlucky in love... good luck in the contest. -
oh how so true,dare we let those who choose not to reconize time is limited for most, it never waits for any one, good luck in this contest...MM
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